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No Return


Ion days splintered away,
while insomnia winks and smirks.
Bitter flames lap the walls,
to where rancid aromas lurk.

Within a wake of silence,
treasure maps are unveiled.
Hollow eyes give a vacant stare,
sallow skin now paled.

Satanic dreams fill dancing orbs,
blood soaked at their peak.
Air laced with putrid scents,
opal smiles graze your cheek.

Wicked sensations enlighten,
whilst caught in a purple haze.
Lost in a labyrinth of emotion,
ebony darkness leads the way.

Surrounded wholly by soured decay,
charred flesh now crisp and black.
Minutes tick your life away,
laughing, there's no turning back.

 

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Prompt; *~*~*~Wicked Sensation~*~*~*

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  • JohnnyD gold member
    August 11

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    I absolutely loved the choice of rhyming words in this pen, especially smirks/lurks, very well done and a right proper flow for a dark write.

    Bravo!



    len


  • High Flyer
    March 1
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    I liked this piece a lot! Very dark and an excellent take on the prompt!!

  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 16

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    this is indeed some wicked wicked stuff, but as i read it i also find a hint of something else i can't put my finger on, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • aboomer silver member
    February 15

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    Wow, I'd say you did excellent with that prompt! Great wording and images! I especially liked,
    'Wicked sensations enlighten,
    whilst caught in a purple haze.
    Lost in a labyrinth of emotion,
    ebony darkness leads the way.'
    Good luck in your contest.

  • Dark, deep and with outstanding imagery. Lady D brings out the best in horror writing. Wonderful stuff.

    Lots of love
    Wayne Leon

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