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"Long Since Forgotten"

Twisted thoughts fill my head
Wilted flowers almost dead

Left to rot beneath violent skies
Worms slowly adding to my demise

A note was written to cover the lies
The truth only seen through my victimed eyes

No one there to heal my wounds
An untimely death too little too soon.

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  • Volfeng
    June 4, 2008
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    great piece

    well done here, lots of atmosphere!


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    February 19, 2008
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    Wow

    i really liked this
    it was sad, gripping and moving.
    Great job! Kudos!


  • Kelli Marie
    February 15, 2008

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    Great rhythme and rhyme. Reads easy with a great flow. I enjoyed it very much. I think you did a great job.
    Kelli