Well, hello there my little darlings
Just pushing up through the sod
I know that you'll be beautiful
Touched by the Hand of God
Maybe you'll be a flower
Or perhaps a lovely tree
Maybe a row of plants
Filled out for all to see
How wonderful that you have chosen
To pop up in this desolate place
Your beauty and your charm
Give much radiance and grace
May I welcome you to Spring
As you continue to sprout around
And grow up into whatever you'll be
Bringing beauty to this spot of ground
A contest entry
- Photo Inpired/ 12/30 by AliceinPoetryLand.
600 points, ended February 16, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
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This is such a beautiful piece and flows so well with an excellent rhyming scheme. Just a few too many over the 30 words though.
I thank you for sharing this beautiful piece
Gaylene
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I realized this and had tried to delete it and enter another, but contest was closed. Thank you for your comment. It is appreciated.
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Excellent Write
totally wonderful write. I could picture some very beautiful tulips coming up in the middle of the forest and they were bright red, standing out making themselves known..............novy
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Thanks Novy
As always I appreciate your comments. Glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
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This is a really wonderful write. Unfortunately, I noticed that the contest called for 30 words...
I hope you are able to keep this one, but write one that fits the contest.
Kelli
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