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Intercession

Missing image

Weeps the moment

in the soul

when innocence is raped

by shadows when one thought

light was hidden.

 

In the interlude of agony and betrayal,

third eye opens to tapestry of truth,

love seeps from karmic well,

forgiveness tugs from astral hands,

reaching forth in golden caress,

universal song brings its ethereal clarity,

predators revealed as victims,

heart bears the burden

of a guardian's robe.

 

Plume spreads from seer's awakening

accepting the dawn of one's call.

 

From the scars born

comes the keeper of sacred essence,

who accepts the altar of message

to intercede between darkness and day,

held in one's being with bruised arms

because the voice from within

speaks from others

and there is more joy in obedience

than being deaf.

Author notes

Picture "Angel Eggs" by Annah Hutchings (Amarys)

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  • Desire gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    Magnificent!

    Love this one Sweetness
    Wonderful weaving of words~~

    In the interlude of agony and betrayal,
    third eye opens to tapestry of truth,
    love seeps from karmic well,

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do William
    Best wishes too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 18, 2008

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    Now this is one heck of a profound, solid piece. It reaches the soul and takes it prisoner. I felt like my heart would burst from my chest reading this one. Excellent job.


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    February 17, 2008

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    As always, you have captured the moment in this picture. Bringing the visual to such dynamic heights. You have penned a fantastic write. Bravo.. Good luck in the contest.
    Soulful Woman


  • stavykm gold member
    February 15, 2008

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    Excellent

    Very deep and profound write here. I could really relate to it and read it several times. You penned an increadible poem in which I wonder even if yourself understand truely what you have penned here. Probably so but from this end this was so prophetically true to my own life. Very Deep emotionally. Thank you and best wishes to you in the contest.
    Blessings
    Kelle Marie


  • spiritualangel
    February 15, 2008

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    Weeps the moment
    in the soul
    when innocence is raped
    by shadows when one thought
    light was hidden.

    Brilliance of choice in perfection.

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