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Mist-Fire

Dancing crystals flow
A glowing shell of winter
My breath is mist-fire

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Hope you like it!
"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    February 20, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry, vivid images throughout. Good form, though your count in last line is slightly off as the word fire is two syllables. Appreciate your entry, Ken IBT