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On Me

I need a new beginning
A reason to be living
Its not just me I'm lying to
I need to start life a new
Or else I will die
I hope you do not cry
because of me
In the new beginning
I will not play your game
I will not bring down the wall of shame
on me
I don't want your hand
you'll only pull me down
So save your breath
Don't waste your song
on me



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  • Deathwolf Tasagka
    February 19, 2008

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    Interesting. I likes it its good. Short but shows alot of emotions within it and a deep side of irony of straight to the point. Good write


    • RebelliousKiss
      February 19, 2008
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      I have to say, It is not one of my better oems. But thanks anyway. I love it that you like it.


  • ClandestineDreams
    February 15, 2008
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    Chloe if you dare kill yourself I will kill myself. Oh and really I wrote songs for you . I have them in my binder I'll show you it on Moday. Cause I want to know if I can post it cause it's on you my sweeney todd alex Fall Out Boy Signing sad and happy friend.

    • RebelliousKiss
      February 18, 2008
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      Of course not! (not now) but its gonna be on tuesday k? Monday is off....... but thanks! (i like the alex part