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Daddy's Love

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How do I say goodbye, when I didn’t say hello??
I love you so much, how do I let you go??
The future was bright, but not anymore,
My heart hurts like never before.
The pain and confusion I feel inside,
I can not explain, I can not describe.
You are blessed my child, you're in heaven up above.
You'll never be alone, you have Daddy's love.
You're my perfect angel, I dreamed you long ago.
I never got to hold you, breaks my heart to let you go.
I have so many questions and there are no answers to find
But don't think for just a second that you'll ever leave my mind.
Although you didn't meet me and look into my eyes,
Daddy will be thinking of you when I look up in the skies.

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This poem was penned in memory of my beloved little boy whom I lost through miscarriage.
I will always love you and hope that one day we will be together.

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  • Desireexoxo21419
    June 26, 2008
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    This has such an awesome flow, I LOVE IT!!!
    I admire your poem


  • maralisa silver member
    June 14, 2008

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    he future was bright, but not anymore,
    My heart hurts like never before.
    The pain and confusion I feel inside,
    I can not explain, I can not describe.
    You are blessed my child, you're in heaven up above.
    You'll never be alone, you have Daddy's love.
    You're my perfect angel, I dreamed you long ago.
    I never got to hold you, breaks my heart to let you go.
    I have so many questions and there are no answers to find
    But don't think for just a second that you'll ever leave my mind.
    Although you didn't meet me and look into my eyes,
    Daddy will be thinking of you when I look up in the skies.wow perfect wonderful thinking of him when you look up to the skies is just so beatiful congratulations on the shiny and remember he will be looking down on you xx


  • Daltons.Chew.Toy
    June 7, 2008

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    i cant stop crying my angel. this is my favorite, acctually, no. every one of your poems is my favorite


  • XBeautiful MistakeX
    May 31, 2008

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    Such a sad topic. I hate that anyone ever has to feel pain like this...Ive lost 2. and though at the time it doesnt feel like it..The pain soon fades away..and you know that hes looking down on you.

    xoxo
    Oz


  • slipperssun gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    it is beautiful to see the heartfelt words from a fathers heart... may you always feel the love of your son as he watches over you
    cheers
    Jen


  • daviscth silver member
    May 21, 2008
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    This is such a beautiful tribute to your baby boy. Thanks so much for sharing it with me.


  • Angelflower
    March 14, 2008

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    Here's a hug!

    Questions with no answers are like slaps in the face..I give you my luv with this one.. Sad but not giving up.. always look up when your down hun, and know he smiles with you when your happy..


  • The Rose God Ororon
    March 7, 2008

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    Awsome

    I know excatcly how you feel if youd like read my poem called the Father I never Had sorry I dont have the link right now but it is on my page good right


  • Midnite wolf gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    this is such a wonderful write, you describe the confusion and sadness so well, its very well written and the feelings involved are so raw. great write.


  • Perfectly Imperfect
    March 2, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful and sad piece of writing. It touches my heart because I have felt similar pain in the loss of my daughter. It is an unbearable pain that no one should have to feel, and I agree with the comment below about it being foolish to think only women suffer. I'm sorry for your loss, and wish you all the best. Thank you for sharing


  • Celinda Luna
    February 28, 2008

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    Beautifully Heartbreaking

    I had to stop and dry my eyes for a minute before posting. I can't say I know what you're going through but I think pain is universal and I could see my own pain through this. I've never seen a work from the male perspective. How foolish for people to think only the woman suffers when it happens. Beautifully made.


  • jackysunshine
    February 27, 2008

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    Brilliant

    Your inspiration is wonderful. Remember love is the stongest force in the universe and it cannot be broken by anyone or anything.


  • albymyheart gold member
    February 17, 2008

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    Oh, this is a beautiful expression of the lost love you hold for the child you never got to see and hold. Can really feel what you feel in these words. A very special write. Thank you for sharing this.
    alby


  • Angel Of Heaven99
    February 15, 2008

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    Very touching and sad. Something I can totally relate to and I am sure your little boy is watching and protecting you. Always by your side. This is very touching as well as heartbreaking. No parents should have to go through this. Many blessings to you!

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