Supreme is your adoration in my heart
Over and above that of any other
Undulating the bond of passion we share
Lavishing mutual Love words we utter.
Making us complete in each other
And enriching both without depleting
To bring us, even here to Heaven's brink
Elevating us to Perfection's completing!
Author notes
Option #1: An acrostic of SOULMATE
A contest entry
- SOULMATE A.C.R.O.S.T.I.C ~ PIC~ or WORDBANK Option of "3" by LilyRose.
900 points, ended March 2, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
point out misspellings or things I can improve upon in a kind and friendly way--THANKS!
Comments
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Cradled within the soul, touching hearts, and an embrace that is so beautiful in this piece and the pic brings a nice warm deep connection with your words...
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Beautiful take on this contest
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A very well written acrostic. I haven't written many of these. You did a great job. I hope you do well in the contest.
Kelli
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Thank you for your kind remarks. You ought to try it, writing Acrostics are challenging and fun!
Thanks so much,
David
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