S uddenly I realize that you mean the world to me
O ut side my shell, a whole other world I can see
U nderstanding and trust
L ove without lust
M arried to your soul
A fter you brought life to my heart of coal
T ime is running out
E very night I dream of you, without a doubt
A contest entry
- SOULMATE A.C.R.O.S.T.I.C ~ PIC~ or WORDBANK Option of "3" by LilyRose.
900 points, ended March 2, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice work!
Glad you won a trophy for this, it's . Acrostics are among my favs & you did a fine job of this. It's amazing that some don't realize that when you do an acrostic that each line should blend & be harmonious to the theme of the word! I don't know why one would bother doing an Acrostic otherwise. I can see you're going to have a nice 'married' life with your 'Soul Mate'!
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this is so beautiful about how deep love goes
i love this part
U nderstanding and trust
L ove without lust
lust is good too thought
but true love is way more WTG!! 
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i really like this. it makes perfect since. good job!
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Ahhh unexpected love touching and connecting within you...wonderful and refreshing.
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this is a very good write hun. and your take on the prompt is awesome. best of luck to you in the contest.
~Angelic Princess~
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Awesome take on this contest!
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I enjoyed reading this acrostic. Like the rhymes as well, though the coal line seems a bit forced. Still you did a great job. I hope you do well in the contest.
Kelli
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