I wish I was a penis
I’d be in such control
Looking for my Venus
I’d jump right in her hole
I like to get real hard
When I’m with my date
I’d fuck her in the yard
No room for a debate
If I was a cock
Looking for a hole
I’d be hard as a rock
And I would take control
I think I’d like 12 inches
Buried deep in her
There would be no shrinkages
When I’m in pussy fur
If I was a dick
Thinking with my head
I would be a prick
My body sure is dead
A contest entry
- Wicked Sensation by Acidanthra.
700 points, ended March 1, 2008, 12 entries
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Beautiful! Seeing the title, I just had to read this and you didn't disappoint. Great sense of humor, great imagery, the flow and form of this were perfect for the subject matter. I laughed outloud and read it twice.
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Not only is this deep, but it is tight and wet, too. It reminds me of my motorcycle.
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well, this was not was I was looking for, but you had me rolling with thi piece!! halariously penned!!
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this is really good I took this from it that guys think with there dicks and that all that matters is pussy nothing else...I dont know if that is the message you intended to send but this is what I took from it I liked it and found it truthful and comical it had a depth to it somehow....you are very talented to be able to make a poem about a penis be deep lol....but great job
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this is very distrubing yet for some reason it makes me think of the entire guys species gender shit. wow. u are really amazing. you piss me off but interest me at the same time. interesting poem... if not at least alittle bit bazarr
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