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Cheese Please

A cheese lover I be
Any kind pleases me
Holey swiss,sharp cheddar,
Roquefort what is better
Farmers,cottage,sweet cream
Even brie will make me beam
Parmesan,mozzarella
American quite mellow
Keep fillet mignon,don't tease me
Make me happy,cheese me

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Written November 22nd, 2003

Ptompt 9.Personally. I like cheese.

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  • Mirthryl
    November 3, 2008

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    A truly dedicated cheese gourmet! Delightful rhyme, tantalizing descriptions of so many favorites. Great conclusion, "make me happy, cheese me!


  • aslanlight
    October 27, 2008
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    You didn't mention my favourite, goat's cheese! Yum


  • aslanlight
    October 27, 2008

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    Humm cheese me, nice phrase, it could catch on. This has a great flow and feel to it, so much so that I would've liked it to be longer because it's enjoyable. Thanks for entering!


  • Mary O gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    Delightful

    Such a delightful write. Not much of a cheese lover myself but I have to say I enjoyed the read. Well done and good luck to you.
    ~Mary O


  • james119
    February 17, 2008
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    We love it

    Perfectly cheesy and very pleasy.


  • da cheesey trump
    June 1, 2007
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    i like it

    i really like this poem (and all the cheese)
    i hope you do well

    good luck


  • aslanlight
    June 5, 2005
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    Well this cheesed me!
    All the wonderful different cheeses to rub in my face, well I can't eat them right now. Thanks for your entry.


  • Sherry gold member
    November 22, 2003
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    Gramps this is very cute, lol I like swiss cheese with the holes haven't had any in a longtime Nice uplifting read
    Love,Sherry


  • Beauty Sleeps
    November 22, 2003
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    Very cute and I liked it... CHEESE ME, TOO!!! Just kidding... made me giggle. Very good... Good luck in the contest and keep writing!
    Kate

  • rixi
    November 22, 2003
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    lmfao, excellent. the last lines were kinda amusing. a late entry my computer crashed and i was going to close this just now but two more entries since i rebooted which means im gonna have to keep it open for another twenty minutes. please comment on another poem in this contest otherwise you will be disqualified.

    much love

    be lucky

    ~rixi~


  • Madison Attitude
    November 22, 2003
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    lol @ cheese me, erm...cheese me too please?

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