A cheese lover I be
Any kind pleases me
Holey swiss,sharp cheddar,
Roquefort what is better
Farmers,cottage,sweet cream
Even brie will make me beam
Parmesan,mozzarella
American quite mellow
Keep fillet mignon,don't tease me
Make me happy,cheese me
Author notes
Written November 22nd, 2003
Ptompt 9.Personally. I like cheese.
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What did you think
Comments
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A truly dedicated cheese gourmet! Delightful rhyme, tantalizing descriptions of so many favorites. Great conclusion, "make me happy, cheese me!


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You didn't mention my favourite, goat's cheese! Yum
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Humm cheese me, nice phrase, it could catch on. This has a great flow and feel to it, so much so that I would've liked it to be longer because it's enjoyable. Thanks for entering!

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Delightful
Such a delightful write.
Not much of a cheese lover myself but I have to say I enjoyed the read. Well done and good luck to you.
~Mary O

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We love it
Perfectly cheesy and very pleasy. -
i like it
i really like this poem (and all the cheese)
i hope you do well
good luck
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Well this cheesed me!
All the wonderful different cheeses to rub in my face, well I can't eat them right now. Thanks for your entry. -
Gramps this is very cute, lol I like swiss cheese with the holes haven't had any in a longtime
Nice uplifting read
Love,Sherry -
Very cute and I liked it... CHEESE ME, TOO!!!
Just kidding... made me giggle.
Very good... Good luck in the contest and keep writing!
Kate
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lmfao, excellent. the last lines were kinda amusing. a late entry my computer crashed and i was going to close this just now but two more entries since i rebooted which means im gonna have to keep it open for another twenty minutes. please comment on another poem in this contest otherwise you will be disqualified.
much love
be lucky
~rixi~ -
lol @ cheese me, erm...cheese me too please?
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