Unpick the stitches [because I think I'm finally healed].
These nights are no longer sleepless
because my heart is no longer mine
& even when struggling through a math test I
didn't even try to study for
[because I was wandering barefoot through the city
with you]
my head is a hundred thousand miles away.
[Wishing to be back in your arms.]
I've never missed someone when I'm
on the phone to them for hours on end
before; [then again, these emotions that are
filling my hollow insides are also a
first, and it's all because of you.]
My life would be complete - no, amazingly fulfilling - if I was blessed enough to spend it with you; and maybe these are empty, teenage [and terribly cliche] dreams, hopes...unrealistic in this disillusioned life.
But still I can't let them go. I want them to be true, because you know you've found a connection as special as this when you never want to go to sleep [because every moment awake is better than a dream.] This is love. Each embrace and each kiss leaves me breathless. I hope this lasts forever.
[I love you.]
A contest entry
- strong feelings by Violent Glass.
425 points, ended March 3, 2008, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - L.O.V.E!!!! by Condemd RyeZing.
555 points, ended February 27, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It a very nice write and the flow is quite refreshing. It's sort of prose. Thank you for entering.
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sweetness! You've been bit my the love bug! Have fun! It is a most lovely ride, I hope it lasts forever for you.
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this is a great write! I love certain people very much but I dont think its as strong as you have clearly described. I do love people so much that I miss them all the time, even when I was just with them but I know its not true love. great job on putting these emotions into beautiful writing.
Zannah
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