She said I love you
with Valentines day on her breath
Her toes, painted red
She grabbed her lover by the tie
her lucious lips lined with
strawberry love.
She popped each
button on his shirt. With
each button a kiss was laid
on each of his ripped abs.
her tongue drew lazy circles
around his belly button.
She pulled the button off
and slid the zipper down
and pulled his hands down...
She had anticipated this moment since
he walked out the door this morning.
Her hot chocolate-y delicious mouth
waiting to touch it.
She wanted to touch it
oh so bad she wanted it
she stood up...
her hair cascading down her shoulders
and her back she pulled the straps
down.
Bare, tan shoulders, slendr.
His blue eyes staring intensly
as she slid the other strap off
the night gown came crashing down
with such elegence.
Nothing...but a whisper.
She stood naked before him
moonlight and candles glistening
as she dropped to her knees
crushing the rose petals beneath her.
The scent permeatated the room.
Passion.
She slid between his legs and began running
her hands feverishly around his body...
feeling every muscle and area on his body
He was hers...
She kissed the cock with exquisite pop as it slid
down into her throat,
she gently began to pump the cock between those
plump lips. Slurping and sucking sounds...
and the angelic moaning and grunting of a man
who needed his release.
She slid up to his stomach,
marking her travels with lipstick kisses.
She straddle him and plunged
herself deep...
In and out in and out
rymthic poundings
moans of animalistic lust...
ample breasts bouncing
with youthful action.
She climbed off of his heaving bod
and licked his cock clean.
She carefully squirted cream on
his chest and put strawberries on his
abs.
She dipped the strawberries in the cream
and held it to his lips.
" Happy Valentines day" She said
as she got up took the money on the dresser
and walked out the door.
Author notes
ha ha i put a twist on it...after all
Hookers need valentines love too!!!
In a list
A contest entry
- Erotic Valentines by Lonesome Angel.
500 points, ended February 21, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A very good twist on Valentines Day. It felt like watching a porno except there is no gameshow music in the background.
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very passionate
all your poems seem to have very thoughtfull metaphores!
thats my kind of poetry!
just this one first cought my attention, but if the rest of yours are as well put togerther as this ill have to read them all!
again, well done!
perhaps you could even give me a few pointers, though i mostly just hint in my poetry. -
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lmao I don't think I ever got this comment!! Thank you for the compliments! You know I just write down random words and they end up as poetry..it's so strange!!!
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Sweet!
Always fun to read your words!
Thanks for sharing you, and all the best within the contest!
-Timothy
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Hmm...what to say? There are a few points that seem a tad redundant and a few grammatical/punctuation errors. Other than that it's a cute write.
"She pulled off his boxers
Tossing them into a pile
She watched
As the cock sprung free.
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