Neither mountains nor valleys
exist in permanence
with both strength & weakness
Only undiluted misery
dwells in eternity
while breath holds sway
Life is criminal
pilfering solitude
from the cemetery
Author notes
Only marked Adult so an 8 year old I love doesn't read it..
A contest entry
- 31 Words or Less With A Prompt. by Exodus.
525 points, ended February 27, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I'm not really sure what to make of this one to be honest. I like it but... I don't know. It's just different I guess.
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I like the last part. First part sucks. lol Middle part is just alright.
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I dunno about that.
I like the beginning, it gives it a certain feel.
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This is fantastic!
I want to steal this:
undiluted misery
Never ♥
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This is a little demented in a vague sort of apparency. Creative! Great write!
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love it
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Lets not be dead instead
this is a great piece good luck to you in her contest best wishes and muhc love always 
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Wowwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!! This was totally fab...incredible....I loved it...best of luck in the contest
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That you love
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You are sick!
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You said it!
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Course I did. She is adorable!
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Stop that!
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& again
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