[Whispering]
I’m sorry, sweetie.
I’m sorry, sweetie.
I…am…so sorry.
I don’t know…………why…and…
I don’t wanna lose you.
((liar))
[Speaking]
I am not a chooser.
I am…not…decisive.
I must…
…settle.
Will you accept this side of me?
Will you slay this darker thing…? —this piece of me that won’t stop FUCKING SCREAMING!—
Will you take me…some place nice? ((NO!))
[Growling]
BEGGARS CAN’T BE CHOOSERS!
((But you knew that already.))
[Whispering]
What do I do now?
What…am I…supposed to say to that?
And he says…
…he says…
…and he says…
I…don’t…know.
((Well I guess that just makes everything all better now, doesn’t it?))
Author notes
Revamp of an old poem.
And...as some people have found it confusing...here's the story.
Matt...ex-boyfriend...cheated. The original poem was pretty much begging for acceptance...to have the continual cheating explained. It's basically a reflection of what he said, what I thought...and just how angry it makes me that every significant other I've had has cheated on me. Dicks...
Thoughts?
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awesome
Another Vanderbilt great. I love the back and forth design, though at first it seemed like one person who was schizo. BTW seems like he was a real dumb ass.
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I should probably edit this one again to rid it of the schizo sounding style, BUT glad you liked. Thanks for the clappy hands and all. He was a bit of a dumb ass.
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This is crazy. I don't know what is happening. But, it got me really pulled in at the first then I kind of lost interest as I didn't know what was happening. haha. But it's been awhile since a poem has entranced me like that.
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Well poosicles. 0_o; Don't know if I should take that as a compliment or a not-so-subtle hint to revamp again. -_-; I shall lengthen the footnote! Thanks for the clappy hands and commentation, dear.
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Simply supercalifrigalisticespialidocious
Very good poem. But words cant possibly describe its slightly ravage nature. I like it a lot.
:3
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Savagery is my middle name. Not really...but it'd be cool if it was. Thanks for taking the time to read, comment, and clappy hand! Muchly appreciated.
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I love this! The dialogue is exceptional to me. I feel the exact same things right now!!! You are brilliant and wonderful beyond words.
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Well I don't know about all that, but thank you just the same. *basks...just a little* XD Thanks for reading/commenting/clapping. Always appreciated, dear. And so sorry you feel the same. S'not fun to be angry all the time.
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Damn...got your piece said all up front and aggressively. Nice job.
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Lol...well thank you! *takes a bow* It's a revamp of a poem that wasn't so aggressive. I like it better this way.
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OOOOOO!!! Ok so I am probably not supposed to like this as much as I do.... The title is a work of art in itself I must say. The anger in it is evident, definatly evident... madaam I bow to your gifted writing abilities
ahhh I make no sense right now
your crazy insane friend
chrissy
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Haha you make perfect sense, dear girl! And I like it, so why shouldn't you? So silly. Thanks for the clappy hands and commentation.
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I liked this
this was different and confusing in a nice way
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Well I'm not sure what was so confusing. Anything I can clarify? Glad you liked it, though. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. Always appreciated.
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