The lives we've lived
Abandoned and alone
Fallen to this substance
Futile attempts prove desirable
Fucked in this decision now
Can't seem to resist your love
An addiction I cannot break
Ponders render bewilderment
Nothing proves to me absolute
In this my time of need
A contest entry
- PIF Word Bank Prompt (Adults Only) by elemental angel.
400 points, ended February 15, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hey I like it!
Havent read your stuff in a minute but when I saw you on I thought what the hey let's give it a read. It's a little short for my liking. I wish it was longer cause it's so thought provoking! Emotion evoking! I love it, awesome.
In my opinion Second stanza was better than the first. Perhaps that's just me saying that because im a female and it's so sweet
We'll never know!
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Great job using the word bank words
Bravo
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