Sorry i love you
wanting you
needing you
like rain to a flower
to survive (it is you)
what i thirst (always you).
Sorry i'm thinking
thoughts always on you
without one i'm lonely
lost, hurt, and confused.
My mind is so hungry
it's craving your words
a thought to suffice me
(only seconds till more)
To say i am sorry
it's never enough
selfish and foolish
(can't help it, it's love)
Alone here without you
it's you on my mind
you'll never have left me
you're here all the time
so here i am sorry
i cant tell a lie
I'm sorry i love you
forever goodbye.
Author notes
to my special love. i love you!!!xxxxxx
A contest entry
- *** UNCOVER MY FEELINGS *** by Rebekah-Ann.
500 points, ended April 2, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The love of your life... by jbbrandi.
750 points, ended March 24, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
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I liked this one...it's powerful and touching, and I definitely liked the ending. Good job, good luck in the contest, and thanks for entering!
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I like it. The words in parenthesis are a good touch.
Thanks for entering!
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie
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Oh good heavens!!! you surely touched my heart with this piece!! thank you so much for entering this!!! I saw the title and already felt connected to this poem and how you feel love even passed the end is like saying you don't love them till death do you part, but much longer than that!
Simply fantastic!
Thank you for your entry!!!
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Dang, baby
This one has a razor sharp edge, then a fluffy pillow to cover it. Had to dig, but this is my favorite of yours.
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Lovely, fits the image well...
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You did a wonderful job; this made me sad. lol
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Beautiful writing my baby sis. Wonderful and deep writing this is. Quite sad too. Very very deep. Funny how love can be so powerful like that.
Love always
Wayne Leon
xx
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