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unopened eyes

 

this morning
I stretch
and moan
and slowly
point my toes
to the floor
a smile creeps
upon my
unopened
eyes
knowing maybe
today
will be the day
we meet
for the very
first time

 

 

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this is my 100th poem on AP... I wanted to get away from the sadness and drama... simply put out a little hope to the universe

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  • Puppydog gold member
    February 15, 2008

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    SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    As we wake from our dreams we do keep our faith and hopes alive as we rise and go about our day.


  • De-Throned
    February 14, 2008
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    nice i like the concept behind it, and it is nice and short. Great write. Good luck in the contest