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falling
apart
everything
not talking
sad
depressed
you
ughh
him
love
her
hate
whatever

Author notes

well, random words i am feeling right now ... haha, this isnt really a poem but i wrote it in like 2 seconds... since i am being forced to write poetry in school, im mad at poetry, so i had to get my feelings out some how =D
haha, this authors note is longer then the poem lol

any thoughts???

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  • grace elizabeth
    February 15, 2008

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    i love it. it just like a random really cool flow of emotions. you should tell me and erin your life story.


  • Iris Doyle
    February 15, 2008
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    haha your right this isnnt a poemm.
    but whatever [I0]----<8 <<<<[ipod]


  • eronrox
    February 15, 2008

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    noo hating people
    and talk not talking makes people really skrewed up and emo and depressed
    i'm happy because i make you listen to me talk for hours on end
    so you try it? good.
    nothings falling apart. breatheeee. ahh. i need to follow myown advice.


    • xhappygirlforeverx
      February 15, 2008
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      haha .. mkay... but stuff is still falling apart though...


      • eronrox
        February 15, 2008
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        you should at least tell your bestfriends your life stories
        who else are you going to tell?


        • xhappygirlforeverx
          February 15, 2008
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          yeah i know... but what if its all just in my head so it will just sound stupid and its a stupid reason because im... ughhhh nvm

      • eronrox
        February 15, 2008
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        llliiiiilkeeeeeee whatttttt.
        i wanna knowwwwww. ='[.


  • Clarabelll
    February 15, 2008
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    WOW ok i like it Comffuzling but i like it!!

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