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Hands lost the steering wheel

Pedaled memories
Twisted another day, her previous please--
Speeding brain
turned dusk disdain.

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True story of a recent, horrible accident.

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 14, 2008
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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 14, 2008
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    awesome
    Wow a true story as well.


    • agilejill
      February 14, 2008
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      And, I have an "Oh my"

      Thank you for seeing the more important reason for my write than just trying to be able to P.I.F.

      I'm settled with my new shiny,
      ~agilejill~