I'm lying in wait
'Till the end of the world
For I can't find a reason to live
Since the death of my baby girl
If you hadn't gone away
You'd still be alive
Because you would be with me
Not with those other guys
I don't know how to express
The way I feel for you
I love you so much
You and your words that made me swoon
My life has turned black
Now that you're gone
I can't see the sunshine
Though I've tried to move on
Why'd you have to do it?
Put that gun to your head?
You though that only you would die
But I, too, am also dead
I know I have to let you go
And get on with my life
It'll be a troubling journey
Filled with tears and with strife
Before you died, you wrote in a note
For someone to tell me you loved me
And I hope you know I love you, too
Good-bye, my sweet angel, my Valerie
A contest entry
- Loss by MrsJones.
400 points, ended July 7, 2008, 27 entries
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Please try to be nice on this one. PLEASE
Comments
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Touching write, loss of a loved one is a hard thing. The flow of this is really good, and it definitly came from your heart. I'm sorry for your loss. Thank you for entering.
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wow im so sry she passed awy. but you did a great job on writing this for her great job. and i wish you good luck because im sure this wont be easy if you need someone to talk to ill be here
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