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The Lone Warrior: The flames

The forests feeling changes
It feels cold and evil
It feels like hell itself
Deschain enters a clearing

Lava
Searing flaming burning
lava

There's laughter
It would give you the chills
and make your spine tingle
It's hellish laughter

Deschain gets on his knees
he prays
He stands
He walks over to the lava
He drops his sword into the lava

A patch of lava hardens
Then there is a pathway

Deschain stands on the beginning
of the pathway

He starts walking
The lava starts filling
the pathway

The Lava erupts with
flames of another world
It slowly closes in
Deschain starts running

Too late
Flames consume Deschain

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this is a series. this is no5

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  • Tazmanian Poet
    February 29, 2008
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    wow

    okay so this is pretty good,i read the other ones and it just keeps getting better!