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Be Mine

Will you be mine, will you be my valentine
I will love you very dearly, and treat you sincerely

I'll buy you a chocolate heart, or make you some art
I'll buy you a red rose, or some socks for your toes
we will go on a date, and it will be perfectly great
Then we'll go to a movie, and it will be groovy
sometimes I'll kiss you , but I'll never dis you
You can take me to my place, so we can get some space
When we are alone, we can talk on the phone
If we ever fight, I will try to make things right
I'll be your best friend, and love you till the end
No matter how far apart, you'll always be in my heart
I'll care for you in sickness and health,and poverty and wealth
We'll have good times and bad, but won't forget the memories we had
That's why I want you to be mine, so will you be my valentine

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  • De-Throned
    February 14, 2008
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    i liked it. The rhymes where really good.
    Good luck in the competetion.
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