As the son-of-a-bitch of January falls further and further away
the clouds leave just long enough to let the sun have his say
in the world we find so shitty and so hypocritically great
I can't quite make my choice between ecstacy and boring, dreary grey
Although I've learned more about the universe in its autobiograpy
from dreaming and blindly following my personal cinematography
from searching for anything new and anything left to test
and finding all the potential allies in the pacific Northwest
Hardships teach us anything we can say we'll ever learn
civiliszation can never reconstruct if we don't have buildings to burn
as I wake up with methadone withdrawl and tooth makrks on my ears
I realize never confronting apprehension is the greatest of my fears
Life will have its yin and yang and everything will soon all change
but everyone would be deranged if we didn't notice everything as strange
Commodification has brainwashed us all
into treading in paths inside of a mall
searching for just two more stilish shoes
if our wives piss us off, there's domestic abuse!
and so on down the stairs of social supervision
until you stop at the bottom to watch television
And slowly but surely the human mind dies
subtley- you're content- so nobody cries
noone will notice the lack of human breath
just like how you deny your own personal death
still millions of undead are just walking around
to and from McDonalds with their eyes on the ground
taking up space like empty human pillars
That's why we are the vegan zombie- killers
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Wow... your writes are intruging a very different point of view from my own so I enjoy reading others opinions !
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An enjoyable piece of poetry, it is good to get the ranting off the chest now and again, clears the spirit's nose. A good poem.
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wonderful write! great work
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I really liked it and the fact that the rhyme actually flowed quite well. usually you get rhyming poetry that doesn't flow at all. I really liked this, to be honest I only clicked on it because it had the word Zombie in the title. But I enjoyed it. :]
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wow was this a rant or what?! great piece of writing, it shows a lot of emotion.
Keira
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Rhymes hit the eye and ear like blows from a jack-hammer. There's ranting and rapping, and there's a lot of anger being expended. That much is good.
What's bad? Clumsy spelling ("comodification", "hipocritically"...), although I suppose that gives it a sense of urgency, of being dashed down upon the page/screen while the poet's bile is still hot.
Overall, interesting and compelling.
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lol i'm going to have to read this a few more times.
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That was exceedingly confusing and interesting. i love it.
the colors of the type/background made me see stripes! lol
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