A single deep pink rose
fed by tears of morning dew
petals furled in ruby hued
perfection, true as the love
I give to you, my dear
In a list
A contest entry
- I Just Wrote, to Say, I Love You by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended February 17, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Take This Rose With Love. by Poetryintheblood.
525 points, ended March 1, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Amazing
Wow that is a beautiful image to go with a beautiful poem. You are very talented and have a lot of good within your soul. How love inspires a poet to write. Not only of good love, but often times of bad. I prefer to read those who have had a good experience in love and this is a lovely poem just to show.
Thank you very much for sharing this with me.
It is much appreciated.
And a pleasure to read her on AP.
God Bless.
Have a great day.
~Only1love4ever -
Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie
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you heart is in bloom again an love blossoms from it bosom once more 
or mabe lust? i think a combination of both at times 
i got a verbal card thet was very much like this one
and yup it made me melt to.
another wonderful write, it is lovely to see you heart smiling again
bel ange
jan ♥
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Short and beautiful words. Says so much in wamr and tender, loving words. Nicely done. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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...this is overwhelming, magnificent for me!!!!
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Heartfelt!!
A beautiful message in a minimum of words --
This is a hearfelt and most beautiful work!
Best of luck in the contest!!
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Wow. This is so good!
I really love it and you crammed so much meaning and heart-felt emotion into just 5 small lines. This really is fantastic and I hope you win the the contest
It ends tomorrow so,
Good luck!
Great work, keep writing!
Doodles
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Breathtakingly beautiful Margaret.
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Such a beautiful piece. This shows deed love and devotion! I love the rose you chose to use as as picture on your page as well. So compassionate, I love it.
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OMG Mum..I would melt tooo
Your were right, definetly in a mushie mood hehehe..But look at what it creates, prefection and such loving words
sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
heheheheheh
Good luck in the contest Mum
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oh this is such a beautiful write and i agree auntie if i got a cardlike that i would melt and cry with happy tears of course. this is so beautiful well done auntie i love you
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