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I'm not okay



  I can feel you in my head brushing against my
  mind.I should of let you know i'm not okay you should
  leave right away.i'm just trying to find a place to
hide away from myself and everything in my way.


  All around me i can feel you inside my soul noway
will i ever let you go.I'm not okay i promise you i'm
telling the truth noone seems to care what i have to say
so please don't go away,i only speak the truth and nothing but.


  I feel like i am dying inside my heart for noone sees me
for who i am only me inside my broken body noone can fix me
only i can do that.but my heart is to broken up to even care all
i want is to be left alone.

  I'm not okay to even try i feel like my bones are breaking why,
won't you help me off the ground. Why, is my life so hard and ugly.
Someone please come and help me.

    You said you loved me but you don't know the what that word
means.So,i guess you should go away and stay away from me,forever.
    Cause i'm not okay... ...

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just be yourselfs and tell the truth

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  • De-Throned
    February 14, 2008
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    good write such emotion...my favorite part was:
    I feel like i am dying inside my heart for noone sees me
    for who i am only me inside my broken body noone can fix me
    only i can do that.but my heart is to broken up to even care all
    i want is to be left alone.
    good luck
    De-Throne