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I Love You Now

Inevitability

Lost in the storm
Of this lost love
Violently raped from us
Eternally pained

You say you loved me
Oh now you see this
Utopia of our heart

Now that you see me
Open and exposed
What will you do?

Author notes

I used the Acrostic "I Love You" option, however I added a word. Hope you don't mind.

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