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3 Simple Words

I went to the doctor today
to get a simple test
I was more scraed then ever
as nervouse as I could get

I bit off my last nail
and read what it said
teras began to form
I felt so dead

I sat in the chair
the room began to spin
How can this be?
How am I going to tell them?

I told you today
as soon as I got home
I ran upstairs to hide
to cry alone

Now 2 weeks in
I have to tell them, but I can't
3 simple words, yet so hard
"Mom, I'm pregnant."

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  • JustsimplyKatiee.
    June 20, 2008
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    This is a really good poem with a stroung meaning... a lot of teans like us are encountered with problems like this. You are really good at writeing poetry and applying emoctions! keep up the good work and keep writeing 8)
    ~Katiexoxo


  • z etoile
    May 17, 2008
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    Awe this is a scary thing but it is also a beautiful thing. I know it must be hard for you though but think when they are grown you will still be young if this helps in anyway.
    There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece use the spell check or copy and paste it and put it on word.


  • Mc25
    April 20, 2008

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    who's the father?
    are you going to keep him/her?
    Have you been able to find any positives about this?
    If you thought your parents would support you, would you be happy about it?

    I know that this must be hard, one of my best friends had her first kid when she was 16 yo. She was forced to make a very hard decision on weather or not to keep him.

    sorry if i'm asking a lot of questions... but I've had some experience with the subject.


    • everthesame
      June 23, 2008

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      hey babe sorry i never had a chane to reply to your comment but the father is my boyfriend now Jake it was a boy i was going to keeo him but unfortunatly i miscarried yes i have found positives and i have found negatives also yes i would be happy if they supported me buti wouldnt want the to, i figure of course i will need elp with some things but they dont need to go ot and buy all the baby things

      • Mc25
        June 24, 2008
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        Oh my god i'm so sorry that you had to lose the baby that way...
        oh my god... If you need help i'm more then happy to talk to you...
        My mom had a miscarrige before she had me so i've heard all about what its like... god...
        i hope your alright

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