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Valentines Card

Happy valentines day
Fuck you bitch for turning gay
My heart is surely broke
On your candy I hope you choke

I gave you my life
Made you my wife
Now that marrige I regrett
You owe me a great debt

Our life was a lie
But still I had to try
Then you threw me out
Is this what love's about

So smile and drink
And get real high
I'll party hard
The day you die

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  • Riftkin gold member
    February 15, 2008

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    Then with this hand of friendship
    I offer something new for you
    Do not linger with her at your hip
    But live life to the fullest in all you do


  • elemental angel
    February 14, 2008

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    A lot of emotion pent up in this write kinda like how I'm feeling but I can't find the words.
    Bravo