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Shadows of Myself

Whispers from the sea
taunt me like omens
   distant places
   and time wasted
Memories roll on black
waves only to fade away
   cower in the abyss
   attack in the night
Ocean winds laugh wildly
in my tear-stained face
   what a joke my life must
   seem to one so educated
I laugh, too, hair whipping my
face, sand assaulting my eyes
   I don't like the joke, but 'tis
   better to laugh than to cry
I have nothing left to give
nothing to fear but myself
  dolls in the closet holding
  my name in their hands
And mirror image ghosts
wandering my broken halls
  shadows of myself chasing
  each other, promising release
Death looms on the horizon
but I've no ship to meet him
  such an impatient man when
  he has an eternity to wait 



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  • plainoljoe
    July 29
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    this is one case where I hope the ship never comes in. Death needs a holiday

    Joe


  • takemypainaway
    February 22, 2008

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    you penned for this pic well

    im glad you could speak so well with this pic

    thank you for entering the contest...

    --kat