You left me
Why can't you see
I am your daughter, yet you remain unattatched
What is the problem?
Did I do something wrong
If I could, you know I would write you a song
Just to let you know how i feel
I have cried by myself
I was left with my sisters, all alone
You Left me
Why is that
Please tell me
I feel all ashamed of you and
I am stuck here without a father
There is so much I wantED to do with you,
But you made it impossible
A loss in a teens life,
will and did screw it up
At least it is over with
The fact you are a father, I beleive is a MYTH
YOU LEFT ME YOU JERK!
WHY ARE YOU STILL TRYING
Author notes
This is for page, she understands. She is always there for me when I need her. Thanks I love ya.
What parts do you like? What parts don't you like? What are some things that you think i could improve on? what do you think, in your own words that this peom means?
Comments
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wow, very powerful message. i liked the form and the fact taht its different than most. good job! keep it up!
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thank you anna and yes i understand this poem . . .
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