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The Perfect Man

Pure, chaste, and untouched I am
awaiting for the perfect man,
I only have one heart to give
it's for the one who wills me to live,
my arms wrapped around his waist
our hearts forever embraced,
my Romeo awaits in castle towers on high
I can't reach him, I do cry,
my knight gallops across desert lands
I am stuck in meadowlands,
beauty of flowers I am surrounded by
the love of my special one I can't deny,
if I ever find him, or he finds me
he'll own my heart, complete guarantee,
True love waits every being
I know many of you are disagreeing
how hard have you tried to wait
before you cast out your bait?
One day you will see
just how easy it can be
to give your heart to the perfect guy
not even in the light of the moon will you bid goodbye,
Pure, chaste, and untouched I am
I've not lost hope, I still await the perfect man.

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Hope this isn't too cheesy, lol.

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  • amysticwriter silver member
    April 10, 2008
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    Beautiful...so well written...


  • Asylaarix
    March 25, 2008

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    I am so very proud of you ... this is the most touching poem i have read in a very long time ... Very beautifully penned ... Loved it ... thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest ...

    much love
    Jayda


  • rollingzen
    February 25, 2008
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    oh lord it's hard to be humble..when you're perfect in every way


  • xSarahx
    February 16, 2008
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    You and me both, sister. Just wish my man would smarten up. -_-

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