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ex-fiance

the pure  distain
is all i
retain

you fucked with me
now you will
for see
all the happness
there cold
be

i dispise those
stories
thosee
truth and those
lies


beat me back once
again
and you will see the
hate begin

fairwell you beaast
no longer
feast
eyesight
decreased

angst and forlorn
to never
be born

this blood hate be sweet
your death
be mine
treat

Author notes

ok, i ran into an ex of mine and he bitch smacked me so i hard i fell and he slit mt lip open.... i'm a little pissed

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  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 24, 2008

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    Great poem i liked the was it was written and the style thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck ..<3.. Shelly


  • the pauper prince
    February 16, 2008

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    sorry to her that shit. i'd like to add some more, but i can't right now.

    miss you

    rich