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A Moonlight Spell

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The lure of love casts spells on me,
strike like lightning with velocity.
Temptation such a raw emotion,
stirs passion with fiery notion.

Flaming desire starts to swell,
beneath pale moon's mystic spell.
Enchanted dance in rhythmic sway,
shadows embrace the end of day.

As night finds bountiful treasures,
lovers embrace passion's pleasures.
Fiery green eyes mesmerise,
still of night brings sweet soft sighs.

Lay side by side becoming one,
night eases into daytime sun.
The magic of the moon takes flight,
lost inhibitions bring delight.

Exploring neath the pastel sky,
day greets night and waves goodbye.
Words adrift professed love spoken,
spell will last and not be broken.




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credit for picture given to artist Angel Esyevez

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  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    February 16

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    *sighs*

    Sweet Sandy

    This just made my heart sigh with it's love; the background, the picture and your words just meet so wonderfully and flawlessly.

    You have a talent that I always feel so blessed with by being able to read it

    .♥.
    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    Love to you
    ~Manda


  • tawk gold member
    February 15

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    Wonderful flow and rhyme. What a beautiful take on the picture prompt. So sensual and full of passion. A true lover's paradise created. I so enjoyed reading. Good luck and thanks for entering


  • unsigned gold member
    February 14

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    Fantastic.....I love this.....
    Words adrift professed love spoken,
    spell will last and not be broken.
    Endless love............fantastic........

    Simon

    . Rewarded 4


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 16
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      Good morning Simon, Your comment was lovely and brought a smile. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Take care and enjoy the weekend. Sandy
  • Zyskandar A Jaimot
    February 14

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    good rhymes - first two lines could be in a song - last sentence strong good write on 'love' thanks for sharing regards zaj
  • grammy this is so beautfiul your words always manage to paint such emotion and imagery. i love this grammy


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 16
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      Thank you Char. A wonderful comment. Have a wonderful weekend, Hugs and Smiles. Grammy.
  • chiefmac
    February 14

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    I'm getting used to the quick flowing ease love is squeezed and emotion is boiled to passions flash point from your pen. S2L4 should read (END. S4 is a lovely look beyond sex to afterglow. Nice ending.
    Good luck with the contest.
    chiefmac


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 16
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      Good morning chiefmac, I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Thank you for the nice comment. So glad you enjoyed. You take care, Sandy
  • Colin OBrien
    February 14
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    Wonderful

    This is a beautiful write Sandy..

    • Sandygram silver member
      February 16
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      Hello Thank you for the sweet comment. Always nice to hear from you. Hugs and smiles. Sandy
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