I feel like someone is controling me,
pulling strings that are conetted to my body
Someone is peer pressuring me,
Someone is controling what I say or do
other hand he will kill me
someone please set me free
where I can runaway
and never be seen again
no one knows me
and I can start all over
controling
and I am crying
Now I said something and he is going to kill me,
30 seconds and the bomb will explode
and i will be gone
and never be remember
can someone help me
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wow this has a very powerful burst of emotion. a strong sense of fear and urgency. I idea of someone controlling u and need 2 break free. I feel this with my parents but not nearly as strong as wat u portray in this piece. gd write
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