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Valentines 3


Valentine 3

Where can this simple man begin
To describe someone as lovely as you
In this world of blood sweat and pain
Your loving still comes shinning through

Where can I start, when all I see is perfect
When I look at everything about you
From the tip of your nose, to little pink toes
You amaze me with all your grace, you do

How can I describe those warm loving eyes
That could melt me into a pile of sand
Or that tingling warm loving touch
Of your thoughtful and knowing hand

How can I describe your sweet rosy lips
That move me with the slightest twitch
Or the way that your beauty takes over a room
As I wait longingly for you to flick off the switch

How can I describe your presence beside me
That makes me feel so needed and strong
The moment your not there and gone off somewhere
How it seems just like forever, and so long

How could I ever describe my love for you
As a sensitive man, I’m not always very right
But I know if my mind, should wander astray
You will shine through, as my guiding light

How can I describe what forever is like
I never want my love to ever end with you
I cherish each and every precious moment
I’m comforted in knowing, it will always be true

How can I describe waking up next to you
That warm sleepy look in your eyes
You roll over and whisper a soft sigh
And then you take me to heavenly skies

How can I describe your bright flowing mind
That will always find a way to make it through
All of your charms and your mystical ways
Or all of the magic I’ve seen your heart do

How can I describe your sweet loveliness
The joy of your warm heart next to mine
Oh by the way, there’s just one little thing 
Little Honey, won’t you be my Valentine

copyright: Jan. 27, 2008
Karl Weiss






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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    February 19

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    A beautiful masterpiece!!!

    Some lucky someone is a very special valentine!! Thank you for sharing your muse's tender-hearted and lovely poem!! I'm wishing you all the best in the contest!! Take care. Peace, xx Cyn xx


  • SimplyNoodle
    February 13
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    very nicley done.
    ~ Chelsey