My wounds are deep
Deeper than the sea
My tears like a river
Only no one can see
He who stabbed my liver
Shall never see me weep
I will hold on to my silence
I shall not stop my bleed
I will die without a sound
My curse shall seel the deed
Please tell me what you think
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wow. this is full of emotion. i like your rhyme scheme for it, and also your choice of words.
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speechless all i can say is depressing but real
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Nice write even if it's penned shortly
and the words run through well, too!
Like the commentator below me,
that person's favorite line was my favorite line, too ^^ -
ooooh
that is graphic. i ike this. this is very good, and the title peices is together. you did a great job on this!
'He who stabbed my liver
Shall never see me weep
I will hold on to my silence
I shall not stop my bleed'
this line was great. i like it. it made the poem just flow. great write sweety, keep iy up!
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