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Recollection

O horse dung
Vibrant, fibrous, and pungent
Like a breath of ambrosia straight from Olympus
Recycled nature, still edible
A single whiff transports me back to
The barns and stables of my youth
I hate you only when picking you out
Of your owner's hoof.

Author notes

This was a "Terrible Love Poem" for an English Class. The criteria was the poem outline:
Name
3 Adjectives
Simile
Metaphor
2 reasons for attraction.

This is my result. Enjoy!

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