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A song of love by a ballet move



like the butterflies they were
giving me a sweet gentle dream
one that I hoped'd never end
a dream in my heart that was engraved
a song of love
so beautifully sung
with the soft tunes of the chelleo
my heart danced
wished I was  on stage
sharing every move
he lifted her up
they moved
jumped
and my heart flew
the ballet shoes I wished for
the dream I lived
was so short
yet so eternal
a tune of love
and a dance of elegance

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  • z etoile
    February 19, 2008
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    Oh the moment captured in this piece is remarkable absolutely awesome!


  • Ahkam silver member
    February 15, 2008

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    a song of love

    a song of love, of beauty and of butterflys..how sweet are youe songs...and...and a dance of elegance...beautiful