A transparent awareness of a crystallic
consciousness into imbedded space, radiated
from a blue sky, reveal the possibility
to make your own decisions, facing innumerable
hidden dream-realities, waiting to be choosen
by the breathe of life, your secret animal kingdom,
eyes that see beyond the taste of spoken words.
A priceless eagle's gift.
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie And Possible publishing. by creationsfromheart.
650 points, ended March 12, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Invite only From the 50-55 amazing words contest by creationsfromheart.
415 points, ended March 13, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is really nice bro
i love you
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awwwww, thank you Sis! I love you too
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I love this write and the message it sends. This was awsome...
consciousness into imbedded space, radiated
from a blue sky, reveal the possibility
and loved this equally.
waiting to be choosen
by the breathe of life, your secret animal kingdom,
eyes that see beyond the taste of spoken words.
A priceless eagle's gift.
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Thank you
I'm glad you allow now PW's, first I remove it, but I got a second chance
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what contest did you enter this in I think its very good - is the 5th word in the third sentence supposed to be reveal?
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Thank you for taking the time to read it. It's the same contest as your poem "your lovely touch".You're right.It must be "reveal". Thanks for notice my error.
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