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Boys and Girls

Apathy and desolation
It swirls
In their eyes
To the morbid beat of annihilation
Boys and girls
They're ready to die
They dance
Like it’s the end of the world

Where have
The parents gone?
As the bodies pile
And evil spawns

Born to a world
Desensitized
Boys and girls
Believe the lies

As the lights flash
And hips gyrate
Dreams are dashed
While morals vacate

He’s on X
She shoots dope
Hate, violence, sex
All loss of hope

Designer jeans
On amphetamines
Popularity fiends
Crowding the scene

Blood spills
Adrenaline pumps
Rush of the kill
Pervades this dump

Razor blades and gas mask
Are the radical fashion
In this radiation we bask
Heightening this deadly passion

It’s what they crave
Boys and girls
At the apocalyptic rave
Dance like it’s the end of the world

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by andywontdie, enjoy.

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  • CinderellaSyndrome
    February 25, 2008
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    omg this was a awesome write


  • harkey
    February 20, 2008

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    Congrats on your trophy. You are no doubt the clear winner. This poem has great imagery within it, as well as a beautiful and effective form in the writing.


  • genevieve3
    February 16, 2008
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    i love this poem!