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Valentine

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Valentine's for everyone to everywhere in the world,

And to the one who became the PreciousRainGirl.

Love is in the air even if it's only for friends.

Enjoy this precious day before it finally ends.

Never think you're alone in this big wide world!

Today, every lady is someone's Precious Rain Girl.

I can feel it in my heart as I play in the rain.

Now won't you join me to wash away any pain!

Everybody celebrate and make it a special day!

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Wanted to do a Valentine as an acrostic to everyone and of course the Precious Rain Girl!

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  • Cannonsfire
    February 11
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    This is how Valentine wishes should be, full of fun and love and pleasure. Chez


  • N e a r
    May 25, 2008

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    I did not even notice it was an acrostic. That's pretty good for a form poem. I like the personal touch to it as well with "Precious Rain Girl". It gives it the extra spark. The only thing I felt edgy on was the last line with the rhyming - it didn't fit. Thank you for your entry & good luck!


  • jcat gold member
    April 22, 2008

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    A wonderful and heartfelt acrostic and RainGirl must most a most precious entity!! Excellent job and best of luck here


  • daviscth silver member
    April 17, 2008

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    I love acrostics and you've done such a wonderful job with this one. Good luck in the contest, Cathy.


  • Marcy Anna
    March 26, 2008

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    Oh how clever! Acrostic poems are so much fun to piece together...I'm glad you include friends for V-Day since it seems to be so exclusive to couples now...nice bouncy write


  • Kelli Marie
    March 13, 2008

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    What a lovely acrostic written for Valentines day. A gift to be treasured forever. I am sure it will be. Beautifully written.
    Kelli


    • Ted E Bare gold member
      March 13, 2008
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      Kelli, thank you very much for your very sweet commentTed E


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 16, 2008

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    You are such a lovely romantic Teddy and I adore you

    ♥

    I hope you had a nice Valentines Day

    .♥.
    Stay safe
    Love ya
    ~Manda


  • Sarah957
    February 14, 2008
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    when did u get a new rain girl?

    • Ted E Bare gold member
      February 18, 2008
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      There was a contest back in September/October of last year. It's still on my page under Precious Rain Girl. Good to see you aroundTed E


  • lesbian-in-love
    February 14, 2008

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    That is awesome I really enjoyed it. Rain is romantic I think in a sense. But anyways that was just wonderful. Thanks for letting me know you wrote that.

    • Ted E Bare gold member
      February 14, 2008
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      You're more than welcome as it seems like maybe you needed one considering your contest in which I stumled on by mistake by making a comment on an entry. Thank you for your sweet commentTed E


  • PreciousRainGirl
    February 14, 2008

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    Awww thanks this was very sweet and beautiful!! Such a great writer and feel very priviledged to be the object of such great writes *Hug*


    • Ted E Bare gold member
      February 14, 2008
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      I thank you for all the tenderness felt in that commentTed E

      Happy Valentine's Day


  • WingedWolf
    February 14, 2008
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    Aww this was pretty. You, my sexy sex toy, are one hell of a writer. Great job.

    • Ted E Bare gold member
      February 14, 2008
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      You always know what word makes me blush and you had to be certain to get it in here. Thanks for your great making-me-blush comment. Happy Valentine's DayTed E


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    February 14, 2008

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    Awwwwwww what a sweet thing to wish all the Lady's to be somebody's precious rain girl
    I remember you love the rain...so I guess there will be a lot girls loving it to be in the rain with you...

    So to speak: Your Precious Rain Girls I hope there are many

    Loved the message you left me
    It's good to read you again

    Will be back more often Ted
    XXJeannette



    • Ted E Bare gold member
      February 14, 2008

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      I'm not so sure how many would want to be with me in the rain, but I certainly enjoyed such a beautiful and charming comment. Happy Valentine's DayTed E


  • Layne
    February 14, 2008
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    so very sweet, perfect for today, I lvoed it

    • Ted E Bare gold member
      February 14, 2008
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      Thank you so much and I hope this day will be a Precious one for you and may your heart be filled with love and have it in returnTed E

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