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Distorted pleasure

Clambering down my spine with pleasure
Contorting the view of simplicity
For neither am I simple nor intricate
I am a body of connections that flows, varies
Amends to your touch
Because of this floating essence that covers
My shame,
It reveals this demureness
That I detest
I Abhor feelings, traveling across this body that is yours
For the taking
Profane thoughts of pleasure lives within me
And floats freely as mosaic colors
I stand before you a faded portrait of seduction
A canvas of beauty that is not understood
Other than by you
Let not this backward vision deny the pleasure
That you most implore, from me
Just paint this flurry of distorted emotions,
Within your palette
Of desire

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  • rose petal desires
    February 28, 2008
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    great piece mykee you penned here
    very well played with my poet imagination


  • MahoganyFlow
    February 14, 2008

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    I like how different you are with your writing. This is wonderful. "I am a body of connections that flows, varies
    Amends to your touch
    Because of this floating essence that covers
    My shame," Love this part. Keep Writing!