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~* I Look for You ~* (Cento)

 

 

 

 

 

Sent from heaven above-

              [Smiling]

that blue eyed
blond haired
little boy

that you can have fun with,
and a laugh now and again;

you touched my heart
when I wasn't looking,

you gave me hope
when all was lost,

you showed me
that dreams can come true.

I let my tears mingle with the falling rain-

flowing like waterfalls
across each other and side by side they lay
perplexed and ruffled by life's strategy.

I sip the tears your eyes fight to hold
on a freeway hitching rides
like a promised sunrise.

Be still my heart-

with every kiss,
every touch~

it was like you were the
missing piece of the puzzle.

...And in my heart
I keep this love,

  ~our love~

safely locked...

How many times,
how many days
I talk to you,

just to help me through.

No more "I love you's"
             -but-
       hidden in lines
a sign not so concealed

   .....I look for you.....


   [hold on my heart]

 




Author notes

Inspired by prompt:
...the moments I am truly alive I spend in you...
the moments I am truly aware I live with you...
the moments I never want to end...
are moments with you...Unknown

Written Cento for Sunshinegirl-
A Cento is a tapestry of lines-poems by one author
or many combined.
A lot of energy went into this but well worth the time...

Note:
You are Loved and Appreciated my Friend!
This is a *Cento* Dedicated to You of many
works You have compiled...
Basically, thought to bring forth a message
given to me to pass onto You~
[The Titles compiled...also a Message
within a Message]

Wish You much Happiness-
Love also Light...
Happy Valentine's Day also...

Hope this brings forth a smile..
Was a lot of work but You are worth it:
Priceless...

Links to the Works of Sunshinegirl:

To My Guardian Angel
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3810959
Line 6
.......
What You Have Given To Me
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3812655
Line 1
.......
Dreams To Life And Back Again
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3815269
Line 19-21
.......
What's The Meaning?
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3822749
Line 22-23
.......
Love & Simple Words
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3802319
Line 1-2
Line 5-6
Line 9-10
.......
This Raindrop
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3798857
Line 3
.......
Heart's Declaration
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3849769
Line 5

Written Certainty
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3835629
Line 5

Serenely in Sunshine
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3831429
Line 11
.......
I Wait For You...
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3876537
Line 6
Line 11-13

.......
Heaven is Found
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3873873
Line 1
Line 10-11
.......
Complete...
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3796327
Line 6-7
.......
Yours...Mine...Our Hearts
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3673862
Line 1
Line 18-20

.......
Timothy
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3722930
Line 20-23

.......
~*~Hold On My Heart~*~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3658028
Line 31-36

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  • michellemybelle gold member
    February 19, 2008

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    This is simply breathtaking and I know means alot for our Sunshine! This is a well deserved gold!
    Loved this!
    blessings,
    Michelle


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 16, 2008

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    Amazing!

    I can see why this won Gold, this took my breath away and in a way brought tears to my eyes as I fell deeply in love with your words

    The layout, the background and the lion down the bottom just brought the words more alive
    One of the most creative writes I've ever read

    .♥.
    Stay safe
    Love to you
    ~Manda

  • Liquid memories
    February 16, 2008

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    wow, you blew all the competition away. such heartfelt expressions. i could feel the emotions as I read this. well done. worth the gold.


  • HaleyMary
    February 15, 2008

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    Beautiful write, Sis and such a powerful write. I liked the part of the heart being touched when people aren't looking. I think that speaks a lot of truth. Love can come along at unexpected times. I think people should just stop looking for love and wait for it to happen. Love will always come in it's own time. Keep writing.


  • penman gold member
    February 14, 2008
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    Powerful

    What an incredible poem sweetness. So powerful and amazing. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    February 14, 2008

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    This just reminds me so much of my little boy, wiping the tears from my eyes because I wish so much he was here... so beautifully penned my beautiful angel... gorgeous... I have no other words

    Karen


  • Puppydog gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    Two people who have deep feelings do not have to always say they love one another for their love shows in everything they say and do with each other.


  • StarEyes
    February 14, 2008

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    I am sitting here in total awe.... I am at a loss for words. This touched my heart deeply... And yes, the tears are welling, but can't let them fall.... OMG! What a gift this one is!! I have no idea how to thank you for this wonderful gift! It is beyond words. The love can be felt beyond the words in this wonderful piece. I don't know what to say.... Thank You! I love you and what you have given to me, in these words.

    This is worth the Gold to me!

    Bet of luck in this contest!

    Love you bunches

    Nettie

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