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Communion






Raised empty cup
to full lips
and dark eyes of wonder

came asking

and spoken to heart
all that could be given

my hand and
shared sip of unlived life.




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  • SueRee
    February 18

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    I love the gift of a hand and a sip of unlived life! I've been lucky enough to have shared many sips, swallows and gulps of life after taking the gift of his hand. Hoping your experience has been- or will be - as filling.


  • CitrineSunrise
    February 14

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    I loved the sacred nuances of this short work. The title and the verse could be read as a liturgical celebration or a loving relationship. Very nicely written. Peace, Liz


  • Nicolette gold member
    February 14

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    There is something sacred rising from these words of yours.....a sip of life, wonder and eternal love... Hope you felt that love on Valentine's day too, my friend. A lovely piece of soul this is.

    ~ Nicolette