2/14/08
why does the world hate me so much
i don't understand
i am alone
i fear America
America stole him
from me
when will he come home again
if ever
Author notes
yes, i actually write like this in my journal. i call it scattered thoughts, and it helps me figure things out better.
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492 points, ended February 20, 2008, 6 entries
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Comments
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I like your scattered thought way of writing. I do something similar in my journal. Keep up the good job. I liked this piece.
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from one scattered writer to another
thank you
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