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Inspired By Valentine

Moaning with desire,
Not honest nor a liar,
Rolling with passion round and round,
With erotical ecstasy we've been bound,
The wave of lust is crashing down,
Drunken with laughter like crazy clowns,
Poetry from flesh we've wrote in lines,
Roses & red words inspired by Valentine...

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  • ennovy silver member
    March 3

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    Excellent Write;

    Well this is short, sweet, sensual, full of the lust that sometimes causes your heart to be wrapped in a big red bow. I feel your talent, and inspiration....novy


  • Pear gold member
    February 18

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    *sigh* This was a beautifully inspired poem in honor of Valentine's Day. Would've made for a nice day too, but ummm yea moving on....I like this one it's sweet!