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Mortified

A painted smile
masquerades the pain,
contradicting your deceit.

Under darkness
humiliating tears fall.

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Prompt - Denial (20 words or less)

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  • carole21
    February 15, 2008
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    nice

    nice take on the prompt . . congrats on the trophy !


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    February 14, 2008

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    Excellent. Very well done. Congratulations on your trophy. So deserving of this and much more. ~Pamela


  • Princess Perdue gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    Once again you have delivered such a stunning piece in so few words. Congratulations on the well deserved silver. Well done sis. Wonderful


    Shaz xx


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    Oh wow, this is just superb you have captured so much in this piece.... well done

    Thanks for taking the time to enter this contest, wishing you all the best

    Karen


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 14, 2008

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    You have mastered denial here.
    Well done and best of luck in the contest.


    Delila


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    you have penned this so amazingly with such truth in your words. really expanded the prompt best of luck gran


  • Frozentearz
    February 14, 2008

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    Denial has many forms you have done a wonderful job
    capturing this,
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz

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