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What needs to be said

I'll say this
Because you need to know
It needs to be said

I'm sorry, I've broken our promise
And my promise to so many others
Its not just you who made me say
I wouldn't touch a razor again

I couldn't find a razor...

But the scizzors looked so tempting

I'm sorry, but I did it again
I feel so bad, you don't know, but it won't be long

Please understand
It was all my fault
If I hadnt've listened to those songs
They wouldnt have reminded me of him
I wouldnt have cried, I would've forgotten

But I did, and now I face the consequences
Its all my fault... Its so hard to move on after living like that

Please don't make me feel any worse

Author notes

If the other poem wasn't clear enough, this one should be... I'm sorry, Dani!

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  • November-Dani
    April 3, 2008

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    I forgive you,
    and I LOVE YOU!
    But you see its not about me.
    Im alwayse here for you.
    And Katie, just so you know, dont think ive never looked at the scizzors.


  • xXsoulxcollectorXx
    February 15, 2008
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    you've been writing poems about self-mutilation,is there something wrong???but this is good!!!