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Illusion vs confusion

Love a big illusion,
Love an ocean of joy,
With lots of giving,
Marriage a sweet remembrance,
Life  like waves hitting harder and harder,
The troubled , full of confusions ,
For those caught in  Love,
It is a  smart confusion.

Love is  a big illusion,
Love  brings a mountain of joy,
But  to climb the path of life,
When marriage is in rocks,Yet-
Life  like a river flowing against all hurdles,
With lot of confusions ,it reaches
the ocean  of bliss
God!

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    February 20, 2008

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    This is a very beautiiful piece that you ahve written thank you for sharing good luck in the contest much love always

  • A floatingleaf silver member
    February 17, 2008
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    Excellent

    Well written with indepth discription that flows into conclusion...


  • Purush
    February 14, 2008
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    All the best in my contest

    Thank you for the entry
    I wish you all the best in the contest